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I liked the paced tempo you had, nice and relaxing, yet not boring.
Nice sounds, and the melody was pretty tight (hahahahahaha) even though it was kinda repetitive, but if your friend does the vocals, then it wouldnt be as bad :D
I didn't really like the clap you were using, that's pretty much my only complaint.
Good job, mate.
Thanks for listening and taking the time to comments:D
appreciate it.
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was that personal experience or did you just read about it somewhere? haha.
The song seemed kinda random, with notes strewn everywhere, but i liked the atmosphere, hence the nine :P
Try to make it not as messy next time ;)
read it...and added my own personal flare to it too. thanks for the review man. the song isn't supposed to be the smoothest thing ever cuz it's inspired by an acid trip lol. anyway check out some of my other stuff if you're not to shy. thanks again. peace.
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So this is where it all started...
You guys have come a long way since then, but this is still pretty good. :D
Nahh this isn't our first song, its just the first song we submitted to newgrounds
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Wasn't the first one, one of your first ones?
Anyways, good job, as always, you guys remind me so much of the offspring before they went nu-punk
Awesome song!
5/5
Nahh, the original Ice Cream Man was off our 3rd cd. But I've wanted to keep working it until it sounds really good and I think this is that version xD
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I love the cuttoff in the beginning, haha.
It was glitchey, had weird chord progressions, and unusuall drums... AWESOME
Nothing really to pick at, haha. This was really good, i dont know why it has such a low score... Where did you get the drum sounds? They're really good...
Ha...thanks for the review!
I got the drums from a friend...
I really don't know why it has such a low score either..
Oh well...
ShootingStar
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Damn, the title almost says Seth... that woulda been cool... :(
You had some nice heavy beats going. I like the sound you used for the main gutair, did you use real instruments or was this made in a program?
The drums were kinda bland, tho. maybe add some more double kicks.. I'm a drummer, so i'm kinda picky about that stuff haha.
Not much else to say. .
Love the ending.
real guitars and bass, drums were made in a program. I guess I could pimp that song a little more but I'm lazy.
thanks for the review \m/
damn, almost four...
lol, this is good, i can deffinatly hear your style in here. It has a little more of a trance vibe than most dance songs, but this is realllllllly good. haha.
Try making the kick a little louder tho.
This should be on the top five.... maybe when you'll add vocals people wont 0bomb....
when i make some lyrics and i get an empty house so i dont feel embarassed when im singing out loud.
im more of a rock singer lol
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Good, especially since you used FL, its not really a program to make rock songs, but you did a good job on this.
Whats that sound you were using for the cuttoff at 0:33? cool sound.
anyways, good song.
Thanks very much SethKorn, I used the Toolbox sound in Sytrus, applied the Fruity Filter to it, automated the cutoff frequency and adjusted the resonance to the max. I've got another song on the way pretty soon with pretty much the same idea as this one if that interests you.
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This is much better! lol. The melody was cool, and the drums were pretty solid. lol. Try to add a chord progression under the melody, haha.
Other than that, this was good. Nice job! :D
Haha, thanks man! I'll do that!
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THis is pretty good, you had some really weird chord progressions, and some of the notes you used clashed pretty hard. lol.
The melody you used was kind of random, it didn't have much structure, which is what the guy below me was trying to say. haha. The drums were pretty good, you had some nice snare roles. But some of the build ups lead to nowhere, if that makes sense. lol.
You said you used sim synth, right? Well you did pretty good, some of the sounds didn't even sound 'Sim Synthy' haha.
Overall, this wasn't too bad, but a few notes were annoying. haha.
Peace
Haha, yeah, yeah I know. See what I meant when I said I can't think of good melodies? Most of what you said related with the "mixed feeling" portion of my comments.
Thanks for the 8 man!
I'll try to improve :D
Yo! I'm me, You're you. Now we know eachother. :D I write bad songs. Well, i best be going. Catch ya later!! Peace, dude.
Age 30, Male
Ft. Worth, Texas
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