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Not a big fan of the cymbals in the bigining, but i SUPPOSE i could overlook that considering the good melodies you had here.
This was good, you had a few things going on at once, but it didn't sound... cluttered.
The drums were very dNb. lol.
Could you check out some of my stuff? (Preferably my newest song? lol.)
Hate to badger like that, but i could use some good criticism.
Nice job on the song.
peace