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House isn't really my catagory, but i'll try to review it :D lol.
This wasn't all that bad, maybe make your saw more punchy and deep. And the drums should be a little louder.
Other than that, this was good.
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House isn't really my catagory, but i'll try to review it :D lol.
This wasn't all that bad, maybe make your saw more punchy and deep. And the drums should be a little louder.
Other than that, this was good.
thanks you shoud check out and review automation transformation that one is my best!!!!
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Keep workin at it!
The lead was a little too harsh, and you couldn't hear the drums very well.
Maybe change the lead to a saw, and add a bass. :D
Yeah, It really was just a time waster that I made to show my step brother the program.
But the more I listen to it, I want to make it into a full song.
[So if you liked this, be on the look out for the finished product]
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Liked this one better :D
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it was good, but it wasn't all that exciting after the first part.
i liked the synths and drums you used, they fit well for this kind of song.
The notes seemed kinda randomly placed, and it didn't make alot of sense. lol.
Good job tho
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pretty good, the drums were too fast though.
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The drums were suprisingly good for a techno song, it almost sounded DNB like that guy below me said.. haha.
The glitchy-ness was pretty cool. This should make top 5 easily. :D
Good melody, good drums, good voice sample.
10/10 easily.
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Hey, this ain't so bad! Lookin forward to some lyrics with it. You should make it longer though, and maybe vary it up a little.
also, that drum roll at :23 was a little too fast, change that to 8ths instead of 16th.
Other than that, nice job. :D
dude thanx for the review my band kinda needed some demo's so i threw one of newer WIP demo's up but expect more songs like thisand lyrics are coming soon too oh well i'll take your suggestions into consideration
oh and the roll was in 32nd notes lol but i changed it now
~Bigbeek
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This was really good, you're amazing at creating a laid back atmosphere while still keeping it interesting.
Loved the gutair, even though it was kinda simple, and, as always, your lyrics grasp me.
I could totally see this making top five. I wish more people herd of it.
The drums were good for just program drums, they sound really 'real'.
You're pretty good at the screaming too. haha :P
Nice job, PM me when Off the Radar comes out:D
Keep writing, dude. You're gonna go places!!
Thanks again!!
I also wish more people would hear this and the rest of my music. That's why I'm now submitting my music also elsewhere, starting from bandcamp where I'll probably release the EP. I'm gonna need some money before I can record the next album so I can get better equipment and make it worth buying in better quality.. The echo effect makes the screams sound so much better than they sounded before adding the effect :D I'll be recording Off The Radar today, if today's a good day I might even put it today!
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I liked it, it had a nice atmosphere to it. haha.
I haven't herd the original, but i want to now.
I liked the cutoff on the drums, even though its used alot. haha.
all the melodies sounded pretty good, they were original sounding.. Oh yeah, this is a remix :P
Good job
Yo! I'm me, You're you. Now we know eachother. :D I write bad songs. Well, i best be going. Catch ya later!! Peace, dude.
Age 30, Male
Ft. Worth, Texas
Joined on 2/6/09